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This is a great piece of work, but I do notice a few things with it! The shading doesn't look like shadows, it looks like faded mud >< Where there should be highlights, I see the muddy shadows, like on the tips of the fluffs on the inside of the wing. His mane looks wonderful, but it doesn't look like his tail matches very well :P Plus, he appears to be going pretty fast, but his tail doesn't look like it's being carried by the wind...but maybe that's just me :? The clouds kinda look like that food dish with the golden-brown marshmallows on top of it. Mm, food craving. (Btw, I have no idea what Impact has to do with anything, so randomratingftw)
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SimplyMisty Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, and Yes, I know the shading is off, But (in the description) I had to do the shading a separate time from the drawing.
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JayneCroyez Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ah ^,^
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